Hi, This is an excellent piece of work!!! Except for one little mistake…when you said “I got lots of presents and i loved them all” I should of been a capital letter. But apart from that it was great.
By:Joyce
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Hi,
This is an excellent piece of work!!! Except for one little mistake…when you said “I got lots of presents and i loved them all”
I should of been a capital letter. But apart from that it was great.
By:Joyce