Your story about A princess and the witch a prince was extrordinary but you need to put more adjectives.For example open her huge,wooden door and saw the green smelly witch or there was a gourgious princes called Roxy.
Can you write a story that links to this but a bit different?____or continue it
Why did you put a fullstop the middle ot a sentence?
Hello Mya,
Not good work Mya , you are no put full stops and capital letters.
Adrian
Hi Mya
Your story about A princess and the witch a prince was extrordinary but you need to put more adjectives.For example open her huge,wooden door and saw the green smelly witch or there was a gourgious princes called Roxy.
Can you write a story that links to this but a bit different?____or continue it
Why did you put a fullstop the middle ot a sentence?
Plese check it
Bye Mya