Interesting post. I don’t remember the first time I went on a plane as I was a baby when it happened and apparently I travelled in a cardboard cot. I couldn’t quite understand what your mum asked when the plane took off. That bit might need a bit of rewriting to make it clearer. Keep up the good writing, I look forward to reading about the rest of the journey.
Hello i rellily liked your what you rote was it your fasit time going to the plane was it scerry a lot?was yourholidy good or bad did you have eny firends over there? contry you went to i hope you did have some firends. Hade you lotes
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Interesting post. I don’t remember the first time I went on a plane as I was a baby when it happened and apparently I travelled in a cardboard cot. I couldn’t quite understand what your mum asked when the plane took off. That bit might need a bit of rewriting to make it clearer. Keep up the good writing, I look forward to reading about the rest of the journey.
I like your blog.
Hi Daniel I really enjoyed reading your blog. I have never be,.;en on a plane.
Hello i rellily liked your what you rote was it your fasit time going to the plane was it scerry a lot?was yourholidy good or bad did you have eny firends over there? contry you went to i hope you did have some firends. Hade you lotes
i hope you hade meny firends like you have in school do of you we cold not win the atendens matise has
2 we only have 1 of you evrey singal person came sept you if you came we cold of have by knaw we cold
of have 4…
Hi,
Your poem was nice but you could of described your flight on the plane.
It was good because it seems you was exciting.