Aaliyah Smith

Posted on May 9, 2012 by Deleted User
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15 Responses to Aaliyah Smith

  1. asamj says:
    May 9, 2012 at 4:04 pm

    I love this poem, it’s fantastic Aaliyah.

  2. dshort says:
    May 9, 2012 at 5:19 pm

    It’s quite a stark and emotive poem Aaliyah. It was a good idea to include a note to explain your thinking behind the poem. Very professional. I’m pleased to see you taking your creative writing seriously.

  3. shara says:
    May 9, 2012 at 5:35 pm

    Aaliyah, that is a perfect poem to write.

  4. browg says:
    May 10, 2012 at 6:10 am

    I love how you’ve put emotion into your writing

    • smita says:
      May 15, 2012 at 5:03 pm

      Thank you and I will be writing much more for all of you to enjoy! I use to think poems where not right for me
      but now I`ve got into it. Now I know how amazing and fun it can be.

  5. suikf says:
    May 10, 2012 at 3:09 pm

    Hi Aaliyah
    That poem was really emotional. It really captures you and it makes you want to read on.

    Faith Suika

  6. smita says:
    May 15, 2012 at 5:04 pm

    I will be writing much more, so hopefully you will enjoy the rest as much as you enjoyed this one.

  7. korow says:
    May 16, 2012 at 12:49 pm

    Aaliyah your poem is fantastic I ever read now but maybe someone can better you but I don’t really think so because your very good at writing poems.Well Done Aaliyah.

  8. karae says:
    May 17, 2012 at 9:57 am

    I loved how you structured it Aaliyah!
    I hope you do more of this emotional types of poem, Aaliyah.
    Elaxxx

    • smita says:
      May 19, 2012 at 7:27 pm

      Thanks for all the lovely comments, You best believe that without your comments cheering me on I don`t think I would be able to write another poem and be so GLAD I wrote it!

  9. karae says:
    May 17, 2012 at 10:00 am

    I liked it Aaliyah… it’s really emotional. Are you going to write more of this over-the-moon poetry, Aaliyah?
    Ela

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