Janine I agree that poem makes me think of how is life for real.Also Ela I love your poem!!! It is really fantastic and brilliant.I hope I can read more of your poem and also I hope they would make me very happy as it made me very happy now.Well Done Ela!
Thank you everyone for posting comments on my blog. I hoped you all enjoyed reading it, I will do lots more of different sorts of things for you all to read and enjoy.
Just to let you all know, I wrote this poem because life is not as bad as you think it is… life is OK and that you should not be afraid of anything or anyone. When your parents always tell you what to do or what’s right and wrong all the time, it’s because they want the best for you and they always want you to be safe, happy, intelligent and healthy… never sad, upset, lonely or angry! Your parents always wants the best for you all, so please always listen to them.
Ela
I really like that little bit of information about life because it`s true life is nothing to be afraid of!
I like how at the bottom you told us why we shouldn’t be afraid of life Aaliyah.
What a thought-provoking poem Ela!
Hi Ela
I love your poem about life and I like how you structured it .
Faith Suika
This poem makes me think about what life really is – fun and exciting.
Janine I agree that poem makes me think of how is life for real.Also Ela I love your poem!!! It is really fantastic and brilliant.I hope I can read more of your poem and also I hope they would make me very happy as it made me very happy now.Well Done Ela!
Thank you everyone for posting comments on my blog. I hoped you all enjoyed reading it, I will do lots more of different sorts of things for you all to read and enjoy.
Just to let you all know, I wrote this poem because life is not as bad as you think it is… life is OK and that you should not be afraid of anything or anyone. When your parents always tell you what to do or what’s right and wrong all the time, it’s because they want the best for you and they always want you to be safe, happy, intelligent and healthy… never sad, upset, lonely or angry! Your parents always wants the best for you all, so please always listen to them.
Ela
I love your life poem, its so true. How did you think of something that good?
It’s better than my acrostic poem.
Ellie
I think life is confusing for me.I mean it’s sometimes good, sometimes bad.
I think this is the most attractive poem about life I have read.
By Aysenur Deste
From Renoir class
Ela I think life is about everything you wrote on your post.
well done!!
by samiyah