Very nice shiyanne
It is very colurful. I am suprised that a person in year3 can write as good as you.
Good afternoon, the font you had was lovely .You can change some word’s and the screen colour. Kelci
HELLO The good things you did are you changed the font and change your colour. To make it better you can add a piture Reese
Hiya!!! I love your poem.You’ve often changed the font which is what I really love because it’s now as colourful as ever!!!! You can now improve by changing the page colour so that it goes with the font colour.
By:Kadija,one of your best friends ever.
Hello
Your work is very good, You changed the font, You can make it better by adding a title but it still is good! by:Humaira
Good afternoon, I took a look at your poem and I think it is very good. You could do better by changing the font.
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Hello my name is mercy. What was good is you change the colour. You need to use more Punctuation
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Very nice shiyanne
It is very colurful.
I am suprised that a person in year3 can write as good as you.
Good afternoon, the font you had was lovely .You can change some word’s and the screen colour.
Kelci
HELLO
The good things you did are you changed the font and change your colour.
To make it better you can add a piture
Reese
Hiya!!!
I love your poem.You’ve often changed the font which is what I really love because it’s now as colourful as ever!!!!
You can now improve by changing the page colour so that it goes with the font colour.
By:Kadija,one of your best friends ever.
Hello
Your work is very good, You changed the font, You can make it better by adding a title but it still is good!
by:Humaira
Good afternoon, I took a look at your poem and I think it is very good. You could do better by changing the font.
Broadcasted By CHEVONE
Hello my name is mercy.
What was good is you change the colour. You need to use more Punctuation