Hello,
I found your post amazing sir. You have used which to write a complex sentence. You should write another adjective in your sentence to describe your crowns!
Hello I think your blog is very intresting Mr Short . It’s interesting because I love chocolate as well and it would be a great fun to have chocolate crowns to eat :).
Hi Mr Short I realy liked your blog I especially liked the part when you said you wanted
a crown made of chocolate.You could have made it better by using power of three to discribe
the Throne.:):)
Hi I really liked your poem as it’s really amusing because you would want a crown made out of choclate. You need to improve by using the power of 3 to describe the throne.
Hello Mr Short, I really like your comment because it would be so much fun to eat as much chocolate as you want. I think you should have described the chocolate in more detail and told us about your throne.
Mr Short hay I think your post was funny,good. You have such a good imagination with the choclate crown.
Bot you should have discribed the thronebot a part of that it was good.
Hello I think your post is amazing . It look’s very intresting because choclates are lovley children and adults love it and it will be great fun for everyone. its nice but what kind of choclate is it? and you can discribe your sentence . Your design is nice and stunning.:)
I like your post because I love chocolate as well. Also, I thought it was funny when you mentioned a chocolate crown for your head and I pictured you then taking bits off to eat.
By Adam
Hello i found your post very hilarious and entertaining. My favourite part of your post was when you said that your crown will be made out of chocolate. What flavour chocolate?
Hello ,
I like your post. It’s amusing because there is a chocolate crown and I like the stars
on a pink background, as pink is one of my favourite colours.
By Kerim
Hello sir
I really like your chocolate crown
and I think it’s really funny as well. Sir
I think you should use more
discription to describe what you would be if
you were the king for a day.
I really like what you said about your amazing, sweet chocolate crown; escpecially when you said about your extra large television! Straight away I thought that the t.v was a cinema! What you said was really funny and it made me giggle in my head. I had to giggle inside, because if I giggled out loud, I would have been heard miles away !!! 😀
I really liked your blog… I loved how you have decorated and structured it. However, you should have added
a lot more writing, as I want to know what else you would do if you were king/queen for a day!
I really liked your if I was the queen for a day post. It is fun to read, but I think that there could have been more adjectives to describe the throne or the chocolate.
Perhaps I could describe the throne as being glorious, grand and speckled with ruby red jewels – what do you think? Can anybody else describe the throne?
Hey Mr Short,
I think that your blog was very funny! Everyone in the class was laughing so much! If I was Queen I would make all of One Direction marry me. Apart from Zayn Malik, my sister would go BALLISTIC!!!!! She is a BIG fan of him! Thank you for entertaining us with that hilarious, cadbury’s, chocolate crown situation.
Hi,
I found your post very funny and entertaining and I like how you used different designs to decorate your post.
– Janine
Hello
I found your presentation very beautiful. I also found your idea very amusing .But I would prefer you to use a bit more discription.well done!!!
samiyah ahmed
Hello,
I found your post amazing sir. You have used which to write a complex sentence. You should write another adjective in your sentence to describe your crowns!
Ibrahim
Hello I think your blog is very intresting Mr Short . It’s interesting because I love chocolate as well and it would be a great fun to have chocolate crowns to eat :).
hello ,
I found your comment very hilarious.Also I found your presentaion nice.
I think you could add more details.FANTASTIC!!!
Ayse kagantekin
Hi Mr Short I realy liked your blog I especially liked the part when you said you wanted
a crown made of chocolate.You could have made it better by using power of three to discribe
the Throne.:):)
by Ahmed A
Hello,
I found your post very entertaing because you included a good complex sentence.
By Albi
Hi,
I like your post too, becauase I love chocolate as well and the image of you wearing a chocolate crown is funny.
By Adam
Wow Sir,
Your post is amazing! I would love it if I was the queen for one day. I would jump on a huge trampoline!
By Maria
Hi I really liked your poem as it’s really amusing because you would want a crown made out of choclate. You need to improve by using the power of 3 to describe the throne.
By Alkan
Hello, I love your poster Mr Short but wouldn’t it be better if you described your throne?.
Hello,
I think your post is very interesting, but sir you forgot to write what type of chocolate it is.
By Makbule
Hello Mr Short, I really like your comment because it would be so much fun to eat as much chocolate as you want. I think you should have described the chocolate in more detail and told us about your throne.
byAli
HI,
i love your comment. it was good and nice amzing but you did not pit what sort of chocolate.
Alia
by alia m
Mr Short hay I think your post was funny,good. You have such a good imagination with the choclate crown.
Bot you should have discribed the thronebot a part of that it was good.
from margreat
Hello I think your post is amazing . It look’s very intresting because choclates are lovley children and adults love it and it will be great fun for everyone. its nice but what kind of choclate is it? and you can discribe your sentence . Your design is nice and stunning.:)
by rojda
Hi mr short I like it when you talked about the choclate crown.
You had writen a power of three or a complex sentence in your in your blog.
Meryam
Hi,
I like your post because I love chocolate as well. Also, I thought it was funny when you mentioned a chocolate crown for your head and I pictured you then taking bits off to eat.
By Adam
Hello i found your post very hilarious and entertaining. My favourite part of your post was when you said that your crown will be made out of chocolate. What flavour chocolate?
BY.takunda
Hello ,
I like your post. It’s amusing because there is a chocolate crown and I like the stars
on a pink background, as pink is one of my favourite colours.
By Kerim
hi,
I think that your poem was good
I liked the way you discribed your poem but one little thing you never used alliteration.
Robert
HI,
I really liked your poem Mr Short.
When you said “I want a chocolate crown.”
You could improve the description of your throne with the power of 3.
By: Julia.B
hello,
I like that you have use edible. You could of discribed how does the chochlate look like.
by Aysegul
Hi Mr Short, This is an Halarious Blog.
I would love Cadbury to make me a chocolate crown! 😀
Hello sir
I really like your chocolate crown
and I think it’s really funny as well. Sir
I think you should use more
discription to describe what you would be if
you were the king for a day.
Horoon
Hello Mr Short,
I really like what you said about your amazing, sweet chocolate crown; escpecially when you said about your extra large television! Straight away I thought that the t.v was a cinema! What you said was really funny and it made me giggle in my head. I had to giggle inside, because if I giggled out loud, I would have been heard miles away !!! 😀
Hi Mr Short,
I really liked your blog… I loved how you have decorated and structured it. However, you should have added
a lot more writing, as I want to know what else you would do if you were king/queen for a day!
From: Ela Karagoz
Hi,
I really liked your if I was the queen for a day post. It is fun to read, but I think that there could have been more adjectives to describe the throne or the chocolate.
Ahmetcan Akkoyun 🙂
I’d love to do that but what will you have on top of it? I wonder if you’re going to put on your
best toping.
Deshawn
Hello everyone,
Thank you for your constructive comments.
Perhaps I could describe the throne as being glorious, grand and speckled with ruby red jewels – what do you think? Can anybody else describe the throne?
Mr Short
Hello Mr Short I just want to tell you that the post is excellent.
Hannaa
Hello Mr Short, your work was funny and grayt
from Michael
Hey Mr Short,
I think that your blog was very funny! Everyone in the class was laughing so much! If I was Queen I would make all of One Direction marry me. Apart from Zayn Malik, my sister would go BALLISTIC!!!!! She is a BIG fan of him! Thank you for entertaining us with that hilarious, cadbury’s, chocolate crown situation.
Senem
Hi,
I love how you would have a chocolate crown made by Cadbury’s chocolate company!
Georgia
I would like that too Mr Short. I love chocolate!
By:Joyce