Hi Mr Short,
I really liked your 50-word mini horror story as it is very interesting and exciting… it makes me read more, I have absolutely nothing to say that you need to improve on. Yes, I will try to write 1 of this 50-word mini horror story and I will bring it to you in school.
By: Ela
Hello Mr Short I think that is realy good because you wrote lots of good words that just make the reader realy get to read the story.I have no idea on what you can improve on it and thats how good it is.
Hello Mr Short,
This is a great 50-word mini horror story. I literally can’t get this out of my head! I have nothing to say to this Tremendus
piece of writing. I’m speechless. Very nice job Mr Short. 🙂
I love your story it’s a mystery, which is very good as it makes the reader want to carry on reading, please read the following paragraph.
I went further and further into the heart of the woods, then suddenly I took one big step and fell down a huge hole. I closed my eyes then screamed for my life and when i couldn’t breath, I opened them and there it was something ill never ever forget.
Hello,
I think your 50-word horror story is amazing!
This story made me want to read more as your imagination is wonderfull!
I think you could describe the sound, sight, smell, and feelings.
By Melissa 🙂
Hello Mr Short,
I really like your 50-words mini horror story! I thiught it was fantastic and sounds like this is a good horrow film.
I stand there screaming and shouting for help not knowing what to do.I walk forward and forward until something hits me hardly and I fall on the floor with no more energy to stand up at all . I feel like I am about to burst in tears with fearness.
Hi Mr Short,
I really liked your 50-word mini horror story as it is very interesting and exciting… it makes me read more, I have absolutely nothing to say that you need to improve on. Yes, I will try to write 1 of this 50-word mini horror story and I will bring it to you in school.
By: Ela
Hello Mr Short I think that is realy good because you wrote lots of good words that just make the reader realy get to read the story.I have no idea on what you can improve on it and thats how good it is.
By Hannaa Ijouiher
Hello Mr Short,
This is a great 50-word mini horror story. I literally can’t get this out of my head! I have nothing to say to this Tremendus
piece of writing. I’m speechless. Very nice job Mr Short. 🙂
By Premice
Hello Mr Short,
I love your story it’s a mystery, which is very good as it makes the reader want to carry on reading, please read the following paragraph.
I went further and further into the heart of the woods, then suddenly I took one big step and fell down a huge hole. I closed my eyes then screamed for my life and when i couldn’t breath, I opened them and there it was something ill never ever forget.
– Janine
Hello,
I think your 50-word horror story is amazing!
This story made me want to read more as your imagination is wonderfull!
I think you could describe the sound, sight, smell, and feelings.
By Melissa 🙂
Hello Mr Short,
I really like your 50-words mini horror story! I thiught it was fantastic and sounds like this is a good horrow film.
I stand there screaming and shouting for help not knowing what to do.I walk forward and forward until something hits me hardly and I fall on the floor with no more energy to stand up at all . I feel like I am about to burst in tears with fearness.
Wiktoria
Hello,
Mr short your 50-word Horror Story is really good and you should add more photo.
Aysegul Gurelden