Hi Tigris,
I really like your blog!
Your last sentence was breath taking!
Brilliant its 50 words!
why dont you describe how they are feeling a bit more!
Imagine it was you!
Hey Tigris!
I really liked your story. It was so tense! Well done for doing exactly 50 words, and sill making it good! You done a few spelling mistakes, so maybe in your own time you could just edit it. Other than that it was perfect.
FromSenem
Hi Tigris,
I really like your blog!
Your last sentence was breath taking!
Brilliant its 50 words!
why dont you describe how they are feeling a bit more!
Imagine it was you!
Sadia
Hey Tigris!
I really liked your story. It was so tense! Well done for doing exactly 50 words, and sill making it good! You done a few spelling mistakes, so maybe in your own time you could just edit it. Other than that it was perfect.
FromSenem
Hello Tigris,
I liked your horror story. Senem was right about the spelling mistake. Other from that, this horror story was really good.
Nice work!
By Premice 🙂