Hello,
I really liked your 49-worded-horror-story, but I think you can do more by describing more about where you are and describing more about how your feeling.I would like to correct you, its you’ll not youll.
Hello Ahmetcan, 😀 😀 😀
I think your 49 word mini horror story is cool and I really like your font which is red and yellow.
Well Done 🙂
By Wiktoria
This is a wonderful piece of narrative poetry. Did you write it or did you find it on the internet? If you wrote it, I am very impressed. If you found it on the internet, I am again impressed, as you have very good research skills.
Hi Ahmetcan,
I really like your horror story because it’s very descriptive – I felt like I was actually there!
You could have used a complex sentence.
I like the background colour you have used.
Hello Ahmetcan,
I really liked your writing especially when you used ryhme .
I wanted to read on and on . You could of put a comma, for each line which you can improve.
Hello,
I really liked your 49-worded-horror-story, but I think you can do more by describing more about where you are and describing more about how your feeling.I would like to correct you, its you’ll not youll.
By meryam
Hello,Ahmetcan
I really like your 49WORDED HORROR STORY but you need to put in more photo’s.
Aysegul Gurelden
Hello Ahmetcan, 😀 😀 😀
I think your 49 word mini horror story is cool and I really like your font which is red and yellow.
Well Done 🙂
By Wiktoria
Hello Ahmetcan,
This is a wonderful piece of narrative poetry. Did you write it or did you find it on the internet? If you wrote it, I am very impressed. If you found it on the internet, I am again impressed, as you have very good research skills.
Mr Short
Hi Ahmetcan
I liked your blog but next time use power of 3 and clip art pictures
By Alkan
Hey
I like your picture and discepsun.
Haroon
Hi Ahmetcan,
I really like your horror story because it’s very descriptive – I felt like I was actually there!
You could have used a complex sentence.
I like the background colour you have used.
Sadia
Hello Ahmetcan,
I really liked your writing especially when you used ryhme .
I wanted to read on and on . You could of put a comma, for each line which you can improve.
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