Well it sounds like you had a wonderful holiday. I’m surprised that you found the water really cold though. It would be great to hear a bit more about the sea shells, crabs and fish that you mention.
Hi,
I loved you post but I still think you should describe more about the beach. How was your holiday? Was it fun? Why would it be scary if your sister wasnt there? I am really looking forward to see your next post.
Well it sounds like you had a wonderful holiday. I’m surprised that you found the water really cold though. It would be great to hear a bit more about the sea shells, crabs and fish that you mention.
Hi,
I loved you post but I still think you should describe more about the beach. How was your holiday? Was it fun? Why would it be scary if your sister wasnt there? I am really looking forward to see your next post.
Hi Pekke,
I love going to the beach and I like make sandcastle.
Hi Eda ,
You should of used terrifieing instead of scary.You should make it a bit more descriptive.
From Tigris