Lovely piece of writing about the swimming pool. It does sound like great fun, I’m glad the water is warm. Do you think it is better to have a swimming pool at school than to use an ordinary public pool?
Hi,
I really enjoyed reading your post but i still thik you should edit it cause you did a few mistakes. I think we should have a swimming pool at school all the time. Do you like the swimming ? I do. Can you swim? I can. I am looking forward to read your next post.
Lovely piece of writing about the swimming pool. It does sound like great fun, I’m glad the water is warm. Do you think it is better to have a swimming pool at school than to use an ordinary public pool?
Hi a fantastic piece of writing because i enjoyed swimming in the pool.
did you enjoy it, what part do you enjoy?
Hi,
I really enjoyed reading your post but i still thik you should edit it cause you did a few mistakes. I think we should have a swimming pool at school all the time. Do you like the swimming ? I do. Can you swim? I can. I am looking forward to read your next post.