I am very impressed with this piece of writing because you’ve used ‘which’ to form complex sentences. Also, you have used an array of connectives, including contrast connectives, to ensure your writing is well balanced and informative. Be sure to check your work, as you have made a couple of mistakes with your punctuation (e.g. capital letters).
Hello,
I am very impressed with this piece of writing because you’ve used ‘which’ to form complex sentences. Also, you have used an array of connectives, including contrast connectives, to ensure your writing is well balanced and informative. Be sure to check your work, as you have made a couple of mistakes with your punctuation (e.g. capital letters).
Mr Short
Hi Janine,
Why did you change you’re name online no one knows who you are.Oh by the way Mr short it’s Janine who wrote this blog.
From:Georgia