Hello Georgia,
I think it has lots of connectives ad it’s really nice.
I really like swimming since I know how to swim now,which is find is fun and cool.
By Wiktoris 🙂
I like swimming because…
It is fun and I like paddling in the beautiful water, splashing about and learning more so in the future hopefully I can be a swimmer in the future!!
Hi Aaliyah,
Thanks for commenting on my blog and thank you for telling me what you like about swimming.
How are you? Do you like your new school.
Georgia
Hello Georgia,
I am very happy with this post, as it’s well written and you’ve used cause and effect connectives (e.g. because) to explain your opinion.
I look forward to reading everyone’s comments, as I am sure that you will all have lots of positive things to say about our new swimming pool.
Mr Short
Hi Georgia,
I love swimming since it’s fun in the water, and you get
to learn new skills in swimming which is great. I’m enjoying swimming!
fromTigris
Hello Georgia,
I think it has lots of connectives ad it’s really nice.
I really like swimming since I know how to swim now,which is find is fun and cool.
By Wiktoris 🙂
I like swimming because…
It is fun and I like paddling in the beautiful water, splashing about and learning more so in the future hopefully I can be a swimmer in the future!!
Aaliyah
Hi Aaliyah,
Thanks for commenting on my blog and thank you for telling me what you like about swimming.
How are you? Do you like your new school.
Georgia