Hello Senem,
I would like to tell you that your Rosina poem is fantastic and brilliant. I think it is really descriptive! I hope you write another poem as fabulous as that poem. I cant wait to read another poem of yours!!!
By Wiktoria
Hello Senem,
I like your poem and it wouldhave been great if you read it out to her when the opera came to us . You used lots of good words and I think you should show it to Mr O’connor.
Hello Senem,
Your Rosina poem was wonderful! You should have used complex sentences,
From:Tigris
Hey Tigris,
Thank you. I cannot use complex sentences as it is a poem.
Senem Osmankan XOXOXOX
Hi Senem,
That was amazing and good use of the power of three.
So she’s pretty just like you.
Great use of vocabulary.
From:Georgia
Hey!
AWWW! Georgia, if anyone is pretty it is you!
XOX Senem
Hello Senem,
I would like to tell you that your Rosina poem is fantastic and brilliant. I think it is really descriptive! I hope you write another poem as fabulous as that poem. I cant wait to read another poem of yours!!!
By Wiktoria
Hey!
Thank you Wiktoria! 🙂
Senem Osmankan
X O X
Hello Senem,
I like your poem and it wouldhave been great if you read it out to her when the opera came to us . You used lots of good words and I think you should show it to Mr O’connor.
BY HANNAA WELL DONE
Funny but good at the same time…
Well done Senem!!
good structure of poem and great describing words
Hi Senem ,
well done it was great better than mine ,
But can you try and fit in alliteration next time?
Faith Suika ;