You’ve used the acrostic poem format to create a poem with an important message. Although your poem is descriptive and easy to understand, there are a few parts that could be changed:
Do try to make them happy and be cheered = Do try to make them happy and cheerful
Straight to tell the teacher = Stay calm and tell the teacher
Hi Melissa,
Ireally liked you’re blog because as Mr Short said you used the acrostic poem format.
That was very nice but be careful with your words like cheered because cheered does not make sense in that sentence.
Well done!!!
From:Georgia
Hello Melissa,
I think your put downs poem is fantastic and brilliant. I think you should keep up the good writing and do more posts. I can’t wait to read more of your posts!!!!
By Wiktoria (your bff) 🙂
Hey Melissa,
I think that your poem was very good and meaningfull, as many people put their friends down even without realizing. However, I do think that there is room for improvement.
Senem XOX
Hello Melissa,
You’ve used the acrostic poem format to create a poem with an important message.
Do try to make them happy and be cheered.Do try to make them happy and cheerful
Straight to tell the teacher – Stay calm and tell the teacher
Fantastic blogging Melissa!
AHMETCAN AKKOYUN
Hello Aaliyah,
Thank you 🙂
I’ts great to keep in contact with you 🙂
I hope you are happy in your school and just to say I’m glad all of
you enjoyed my put down work :3
Hello Aaliyah,
We all miss you alot and its great to hear things from you,
you have an amazing heart, which means you are an amazing person
and you have made all of us smile….
We all give you the best of luck at all times.
Hope you are comfortable in your new school 🙂
Melissa 🙂
I really like your poem as it describes how people feel when they are being put – down, although, I do agree with Mr Short. There are just a few things that might have to be changed: Instead of saying “straight tell the teacher” you should change that to “straight to tell the teacher”
Hi everyone 🙂
thanks for all the great comments, I am glad that all of you guys enjoy my
put downs work. Sadly, I can’t reply for all of you, but i must say I am really
pleased.
Hello Melissa,
You’ve used the acrostic poem format to create a poem with an important message. Although your poem is descriptive and easy to understand, there are a few parts that could be changed:
Do try to make them happy and be cheered = Do try to make them happy and cheerful
Straight to tell the teacher = Stay calm and tell the teacher
Keep up the fantastic blogging Melissa!
Mr Short
Hello Mr Short,
Thank you for the help,
i’m sure that i can make my poem a better one with
what you have said.
Melissa
Hello Mr Short,
Thanks for the idea.
Ahmetcan
Hi Melissa,
Ireally liked you’re blog because as Mr Short said you used the acrostic poem format.
That was very nice but be careful with your words like cheered because cheered does not make sense in that sentence.
Well done!!!
From:Georgia
Hi,
Thanks alot 🙂
I’m SOO happy that all of you lot enjoyed my writing !! 🙂
Thanks Georgia
Hello Melissa,
I think your put downs poem is fantastic and brilliant. I think you should keep up the good writing and do more posts. I can’t wait to read more of your posts!!!!
By Wiktoria (your bff) 🙂
Hello Wiktoria,
Thank you for your amazing comment
you really made my eyes glitter!! 🙂
By Melissa (Your Bff)
Hello Melissa,
I wrote what I though and I am really happy that I made your eyes glitter.
By Wiktoria (Your BFF 🙂 )
Hey Melissa,
I think that your poem was very good and meaningfull, as many people put their friends down even without realizing. However, I do think that there is room for improvement.
Senem XOX
Hi Senem,
Thank you for the advice
🙂
By Melissa
Hello Melissa,
I really liked reading your blog because it was interesting.
However like Mr short has explained there are a few mistakes that you need to check.
Other than all of that I honestly have liked your blog!
Don’t stop working hard on your perfect blogs.
Ela 🙂 🙂 🙂 😛 😛 😛 🙂 🙂 🙂 😛 😛 😛
Hey Ela,
Thank you 🙂
I am very happy that you have enjoyed reading my blog 😀
From Melissa
Hello Melissa,
You’ve used the acrostic poem format to create a poem with an important message.
Do try to make them happy and be cheered.Do try to make them happy and cheerful
Straight to tell the teacher – Stay calm and tell the teacher
Fantastic blogging Melissa!
AHMETCAN AKKOYUN
Hello Ahmetcan,
Thank you 😀 !!
I will use the words you have said.. thanks again.. !!!
By Melissa
I think that is true…
I like your monkey image and your presentation!!
Keep it up 🙂 🙂
Hello Aaliyah,
Thank you 🙂
I’ts great to keep in contact with you 🙂
I hope you are happy in your school and just to say I’m glad all of
you enjoyed my put down work :3
By Melissa
Thanks you did a good job! Oh and does anyone know how to do a smiley face…
Aaliyah 🙂 😉
Hello Aaliyah,
We all miss you alot and its great to hear things from you,
you have an amazing heart, which means you are an amazing person
and you have made all of us smile….
We all give you the best of luck at all times.
Hope you are comfortable in your new school 🙂
Melissa 🙂
Hello Melissa,
i really liked your acrostic poem about put downs
keep it up.
By Ibrahim
Hi Melissa
Thanks for the advice ,so now I know what to do in the future if I get put down .
Probaly you could use more desciptive words next time.
Well done
Faith Suika
Hello Melissa,
I really like your poem as it describes how people feel when they are being put – down, although, I do agree with Mr Short. There are just a few things that might have to be changed: Instead of saying “straight tell the teacher” you should change that to “straight to tell the teacher”
Janine
Hello Melissa,
I like your post. It is true that Put-downs can really hurt peoples feelings.
Nice Work!
By Premice 🙂
Hi everyone 🙂
thanks for all the great comments, I am glad that all of you guys enjoy my
put downs work. Sadly, I can’t reply for all of you, but i must say I am really
pleased.
Melissa