A very informative blog post. However, there is one glaring mistake! Luol is representing one country: the United Kingdom! An athlete is only allowed to represent their home country. Luol’s home country is the United Kingdom, so he will represent us at the London 2012 Olympic Games.
Hi Ela ,
I think your comprehention about Luol Deng was very expressive and very neatly layed out ,
However you need to try and use more vocabulary in your writing and make it more interesting . 🙂
It’s a good idea that you have decided to make a little factfile about Luol Deng for people who don’t know much about him. However, I think that the font is very big and it can be quite hard to read.
Hello Ela
I really liked you blog the way you use colour and imagination
But next time use the power of 3
By Alkan 🙂 🙂
Hello Ela,
A very informative blog post. However, there is one glaring mistake! Luol is representing one country: the United Kingdom! An athlete is only allowed to represent their home country. Luol’s home country is the United Kingdom, so he will represent us at the London 2012 Olympic Games.
Mr Short
Hello Mr Short,
Thank you for correcting my mistake.
Next time I’ll make sure to check my work and correct my mistakes.
From: Ela 🙂 🙂 🙂 😛 😛 😛 🙂 🙂 🙂 😛 😛 😛
Hi Ela ,
I think your comprehention about Luol Deng was very expressive and very neatly layed out ,
However you need to try and use more vocabulary in your writing and make it more interesting . 🙂
By Faith
Hi Ela,
It’s a good idea that you have decided to make a little factfile about Luol Deng for people who don’t know much about him. However, I think that the font is very big and it can be quite hard to read.
By Janine 🙂 😀 😉