I’m pleased to read such positive comments about Luol Deng, as he is a very talented athlete. However, the word greatastic is not in the dictionary. Can you (or anyone else reading this) think of another word to use that begins with a g?
Perhaps you could write; Grew up in four countries: Sudan, Egypt, United Kingdom and the United States of America.
Hey Mr Short,
I’ll try and edit it when I have time. Maybe I could write: Grew up in many different country’s. It’s just that I got a bit carried away with my imagination.
Senem
I love your blog and it’s funny how you said he was unbelievebley tall. The one thing I could say you need to add to your blog is a picture of Luol Deng then it will be absouletley perfect.
WELL DONE 🙂
By Hannaa Ijouiher 🙂
Hello Senem,
Think this is a very good poem about Luol Deng as we are focusing about him this week.There are lots of adjectives and a very nice font.
By Wiktoria 🙂
Hello Senem,
It is true that Luol Deng is a tall man.
Good Work!
By Premice 🙂
Hi Senem
Well done locts of adjectives and I also love the font.
Next time try to use whole sentences to make your work more interesting .
Faith Suika
Hello Senem,
I’m pleased to read such positive comments about Luol Deng, as he is a very talented athlete. However, the word greatastic is not in the dictionary. Can you (or anyone else reading this) think of another word to use that begins with a g?
Perhaps you could write; Grew up in four countries: Sudan, Egypt, United Kingdom and the United States of America.
Any other suggestions?
Mr Short
Hello Mr Short,
Senem could have used the word grateful 🙂
By Wiktoria 😀 😀 😀
Hey Mr Short,
I’ll try and edit it when I have time. Maybe I could write: Grew up in many different country’s. It’s just that I got a bit carried away with my imagination.
Senem
Hello Senem ,
I love your blog and it’s funny how you said he was unbelievebley tall. The one thing I could say you need to add to your blog is a picture of Luol Deng then it will be absouletley perfect.
WELL DONE 🙂
By Hannaa Ijouiher 🙂
Hello Senem,
Think this is a very good poem about Luol Deng as we are focusing about him this week.There are lots of adjectives and a very nice font.
By Wiktoria 🙂
Hello senem,
I really liked your amazing adjectives also your font
Keep it up
By Ibrahim
Hi Senem,
Great work that was fantastic.
Next time try to use some full sentences in your poem.
Other than that keep up the good work.
From:George B
Hello,
Senem I like your cacrosti poem because I like basketball and you described about basketball.
Aysegul Gurelden