Renas

Posted on May 30, 2012 by Deleted User
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8 Responses to Renas

  1. korow says:
    May 31, 2012 at 10:22 am

    Hello Renas,
    I would really enjoy your free hot drinks if you were the king for the day!!!
    By Wiktoria and Melissa (Partner Comment)

  2. dennm says:
    May 31, 2012 at 10:24 am

    Hi Renas, your work was good but you miss a fullstop

    by michael#

  3. browg says:
    May 31, 2012 at 10:35 am

    I really like your idea of turning the sea into hot chocolate because you won’t have to pay any money for a drink when you are thirsty.
    Keep up the good writing!!!

    Georgia

  4. sanci says:
    May 31, 2012 at 10:37 am

    Dear Renas

    I really liked idea about turning the sea into hot chocolate because then everybody could drink it for free.

    However, you could have written a bit more about others things you would do.

    I hope this is useful.

    by Ibrahim

  5. browg says:
    June 1, 2012 at 5:05 am

    I also think you should write a little bit more because there is not a lot there that I can read because there needs to be some more descriptive sentences.
    Good job!!!
    Keep up the good work.
    From:Georgia

  6. horom says:
    June 1, 2012 at 9:51 am

    Hello,
    I like your idea
    of turn the sea
    into hot choclate.
    But I think you
    should right some more. haroon

  7. crowa says:
    June 1, 2012 at 9:58 am

    Hello,
    I like you idea because I love to drink hot chocolate as well because it’s so sweet!

    From:Adam Crowe

  8. dennm says:
    June 1, 2012 at 10:10 am

    Hi,

    Renas your background is good, as is your work. Keep up the good work.

    from Michael

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