You need to write some more because there are not enough descriptive sentences. All I know is that you want to kill all the terrorists in the world and live in a massive mansion for the rest of your life!.I like the picture you have used for your post because it tells you the Queen’s Diamond Jubilee is coming up next week.
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Nice job!
Hello,
Add a butler to sreve your dinner that you want or make he go to the shops and buy your best food like,chicken and chips
i think???
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From:Adam Crowe
Hi cool idea, but it’s short, so you need to do more writing to make it more descriptive.
Alkan
hello
I really liked your idea ahmetcan but it is short and you need to be more descriptive
Ibrahim
hi
I like when you said
that you will kill every terrorists
but I think you should
right more.
From Haroon
Hello Ahmetcan, I like your poster but wouldn’t it be better if u described your mansion?
By Renas#
Hi, Ahmetcan,
You need to write some more because there are not enough descriptive sentences. All I know is that you want to kill all the terrorists in the world and live in a massive mansion for the rest of your life!.I like the picture you have used for your post because it tells you the Queen’s Diamond Jubilee is coming up next week.
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Nice job!
Georgia
Hello,
Thanks for your fantastic comment georgia.:)
Ahmetcan Akkoyun
Hello,
Add a butler to sreve your dinner that you want or make he go to the shops and buy your best food like,chicken and chips
i think???
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From:Adam Crowe
Hi,
Adam I will use you as my butler.Thanks for your excellent advice!
Ahmetcan
hi,
I found your post amusing. I also agree with alkan try to be more descriptive.
fantabulous!!!
by samiyah ahmed
Hello
Ahmetcan you will be a great hero if you kill all of the terrorists.
From Redwan.
Hi Ahmetcan , it is a supertastic idea but you can add more details and more information about what you’ll do 🙂 !!!
By Rodi