I could have guessed that your wish would be to play basketball, as you’re a talented player and you truly love the sport! I am pleased to see that you have been able to use google image search to find images to decorate your post.
Try not to switch from past to present tense in the same sentence. You should have written: I would play basketball with Michael Jordan and Michael Jordan would work for me.
Hi Aysegul,
I think you would do very well if you were to play with Micheal Jordan, seeing as you are an excellent basketball player. It would be so much better if you done some more. Maybe you could live in a basketball house with your brother and play basketball all day long and not go to school. Anyway, that is up to you.
Senem Osmankan XOX
Hello Aysegul,
I could have guessed that your wish would be to play basketball, as you’re a talented player and you truly love the sport! I am pleased to see that you have been able to use google image search to find images to decorate your post.
Try not to switch from past to present tense in the same sentence. You should have written: I would play basketball with Michael Jordan and Michael Jordan would work for me.
From Mr Short
Hi
Mr Short I agree with your comment.
Ahmetcan
🙂 🙂
Hi
I liked your idea about Michael Jordan, but unfortunately Michael Jordan is no longer a professional basketball player.
Ahmetcan Akkoyun
Hi I really love the way Micheal Jordan play’s basketball I would want to be like him one day
but next time try to make it longer
By Alkan
I really like how you’ve based your wish on your favourite sport and your favourite athlete
keep up the good work!!!
Georgia
Hello,
Aysegul I agree with mr short you put so much effort and passion into BasketBall,which I think is amazing . keep the hard work up.
fantastic!!!
Samiyah
hello Aysegul,
I really liked your idea but you need to write more than that also you need to be descriptive
Ibrahim
HI,
I really like your work and how you planned your day as the Queen!
By: Julia.B
Hello!
You will be great with Micheal jordan and you might shoot more shoots then Micheal jordan!
From:Adam Crowe
Hello!
Aysegul I really like your post speaicly the pictures but you forgot to use ed ing ly words.
By:Redwan
Hi Aysegul,
I reallly adored your post. You should always remeber that i should always be caps lock I.
You have done alot of pasting . On google images.
by Tigris.
Hi Aysegul,
I think you would do very well if you were to play with Micheal Jordan, seeing as you are an excellent basketball player. It would be so much better if you done some more. Maybe you could live in a basketball house with your brother and play basketball all day long and not go to school. Anyway, that is up to you.
Senem Osmankan XOX