You have proposed some interesting ideas regarding what you would do if you were Queen for a day! I wonder how David Beckham would feel about getting paid a penny to give a foot massage?!
Don’t forget to add the apostrophe in the word that’s. Also, if I were King for a day, I would not allow people who use a small i to listen to any Jessie J or One Direction music.
Hi I really liked your blog the way you would want a castle made out of candy floss
you would pay a penny to David Beckham for a foot massage poor Beckham
next time try to use capital e.g I
Hello Sadia,
I really liked what you wrote about david beckham massaging your foot and you paying him 1p 😀
It is really funny but i would like to ask you, how would you feel if you were famous?
Would you be happy the way you are? 🙂
How would you feel if they sang a song for you ?
By Melissa
Hi again Sadia,
I just wanted to say that you could improve by writing a capital I when you are talking about yourself, seeing as you wote a lower case I. I agree with you for getting David Beckham to give you a foot massage for only one pence. Am I allowed to get a foot massage too?! If you will not let me have Harry Styles, then we will just have to share him then! A candyfloss palace is a great idea! I think you could improve by changing the colour of the writing. It would maker it look more spontanious and funky. If I was Queen, I would have Bubblegum flavoured ice cream with One Direction and get Zayn Malik to marry my sister and get Peter Andre to marry my mum and I will get married to Harry Styles. OK, thanks,
Bye XOXOXOXOX
That’s really interesting Sadia. I like how you said “I would get a palace made of candy floss,which would last me
my whole life”. That’s funny!!!
By: Joyce
Hello,
You have proposed some interesting ideas regarding what you would do if you were Queen for a day! I wonder how David Beckham would feel about getting paid a penny to give a foot massage?!
Don’t forget to add the apostrophe in the word that’s. Also, if I were King for a day, I would not allow people who use a small i to listen to any Jessie J or One Direction music.
Mr Short
I really like what you said about Harry styles. I woul do the same thing if I was able to!
Georgia
Hello, I love your poster sadia but why would you only give 1p to david beckham he will feel care-worn
Renas
Hi I really liked your blog the way you would want a castle made out of candy floss
you would pay a penny to David Beckham for a foot massage poor Beckham
next time try to use capital e.g I
Alkan
Hello Sadia,
I really liked what you wrote about david beckham massaging your foot and you paying him 1p 😀
It is really funny but i would like to ask you, how would you feel if you were famous?
Would you be happy the way you are? 🙂
How would you feel if they sang a song for you ?
By Melissa
Hi again Sadia,
I just wanted to say that you could improve by writing a capital I when you are talking about yourself, seeing as you wote a lower case I. I agree with you for getting David Beckham to give you a foot massage for only one pence. Am I allowed to get a foot massage too?! If you will not let me have Harry Styles, then we will just have to share him then! A candyfloss palace is a great idea! I think you could improve by changing the colour of the writing. It would maker it look more spontanious and funky. If I was Queen, I would have Bubblegum flavoured ice cream with One Direction and get Zayn Malik to marry my sister and get Peter Andre to marry my mum and I will get married to Harry Styles. OK, thanks,
Bye XOXOXOXOX
Hi Sadia, 🙂
This is a funny post. I would definetly have Harry styles to kiss me on the cheek! 😀
Premice
Hello,
I really liked that you wrote I would get a palace made of candy floss,,which would last me my whole life because that is so funny .
by Ibrahim