Hi,
Ha,Ha,Ha I like how you wrote how long she will be in prison for. Do you really mean it?
I cant say there is anything wrong.
Great job Faith
From:Georgia
I really like your idea. You wrote that the you want Jesse J and if she does not come to see you, you will put her in prison for 4 years,9 months,2 weeks, 7 days,5 minutes and 1 second.
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I think it would be very fun having Jessie J next to you!
hello,!
well done faith you have used a lovely presentation.I only think you could have used more description.I will also be keen to see you use level 5 punctuation.
Hello Faith,
I really liked your poem ,
Will you really put Jessie J in prison ?!
I like the tiara in your post, it suits just like a queen 🙂
Maybe next time you can say more about what you will do if you were a queen for a day 🙂
Hey Faith,
I think that your blog was quite funny! DO NOT EVEN DARE TRY TO PUT JESSIE J IN PRISON! That is if you do actually become Queen. I think you could have written a bit more to make it more intresting, but it was still very funny, so thats’s good.
Keep making more blogs Faith!
Fron Senem Osmankan XOXOX
Hi, I really liked your blog post.The reason you have six comments is because the post is interesting . However, I thought that there were lots of commas – maybe use some full stops? 🙂
Hi,
Ha,Ha,Ha I like how you wrote how long she will be in prison for. Do you really mean it?
I cant say there is anything wrong.
Great job Faith
From:Georgia
Hello Faith,
I really like your idea. You wrote that the you want Jesse J and if she does not come to see you, you will put her in prison for 4 years,9 months,2 weeks, 7 days,5 minutes and 1 second.
.
I think it would be very fun having Jessie J next to you!
Wiktoria
hello,!
well done faith you have used a lovely presentation.I only think you could have used more description.I will also be keen to see you use level 5 punctuation.
by samiyah ahmed
Hello Faith,
I really liked your poem ,
Will you really put Jessie J in prison ?!
I like the tiara in your post, it suits just like a queen 🙂
Maybe next time you can say more about what you will do if you were a queen for a day 🙂
Melissa
Hey Faith,
I think that your blog was quite funny! DO NOT EVEN DARE TRY TO PUT JESSIE J IN PRISON! That is if you do actually become Queen. I think you could have written a bit more to make it more intresting, but it was still very funny, so thats’s good.
Keep making more blogs Faith!
Fron Senem Osmankan XOXOX
Hi
Faith I really liked your blog
but next time try to make it longer your level 5 come on.
By Alkan
Hi, I really liked your blog post.The reason you have six comments is because the post is interesting . However, I thought that there were lots of commas – maybe use some full stops? 🙂
Ahmetcan Akkoyun