What a well written poem. I particularly like the structure and correct use of stanzas, which are paragraphs, to organise your dieas. Remember to use the apostrophe for possession – ‘each other’s backs’.
Hi Samiyah,
Thanks for the comment on our blog. We was going to add some ‘Best Friends’ pictures from google images but we didn’t have much time and we wanted to comment on other people’s blog.
By: Ela
Hello girls,
what a fantastic poem that is. I particularly liked the bit you said We never forget we are best friends.
I do not have bad things to say about your poem . what a magnificent poem keep up the good work girls.
Hello Girls,
Nice poem you two written there! I can really tell that you two are Best friends no matter what happens, Even if the world will explode and everyone will die, You two will still be friends forever.
Hi girls,
What a well written poem. I particularly like the structure and correct use of stanzas, which are paragraphs, to organise your dieas. Remember to use the apostrophe for possession – ‘each other’s backs’.
Other than that, very well done!
Mr Short
Hi Mr Short,
Thank you for your wonderful comment on our blog. And Mr short you wrote dieas instead of ideas.
By: Ela
Hi,
Girls I thought that was very dramatic.I also thought you could have added more of an effort into your presentation.
WOW!!!
By Samiyah Ahmed
Hi Samiyah,
Thanks for the comment on our blog. We was going to add some ‘Best Friends’ pictures from google images but we didn’t have much time and we wanted to comment on other people’s blog.
By: Ela
Hello girls,
what a fantastic poem that is. I particularly liked the bit you said We never forget we are best friends.
I do not have bad things to say about your poem . what a magnificent poem keep up the good work girls.
Ahmed S
Hi Ahmed S,
Thank you for your comment on our blog. And yes Aaliyah and I will also do more blogs together again… so keep on reading.
By: Ela
Hi everyone,
Thank you all for commenting on our blog… we will do some more blogs together for you all to read, enjoy and comment.
By: Ela
Ela and Aaliyah this is a great poem you two are trully best friends for life. You mite need to think about using some more puntuation.
Faith Suika
Hello Girls,
Nice poem you two written there! I can really tell that you two are Best friends no matter what happens, Even if the world will explode and everyone will die, You two will still be friends forever.
By Premice 🙂