Hi Aaliyah,
I really loved your poem. I love how you have structured it and how you have changed the font twice.
I don’t think I have anything to say that you need to improve on… but this- are`nt is not how you spell
aren’t.
By: Ela
Hiya Aaliyah,
I am verry glad you have wrote this because this
gives people ideas of what they are doing when
they are interfering other peoples lifes.Everyone shall
and should succeed on what they are trying hard on what
they are doing which makes them feel proud of themselves aswell 🙂
By Melissa………… We all miss you Aaliyah, we all wish you to come back 🙁
Hello Aaliyah,
I loved your poem! You are right about no one should but in your life. I would love to hear more of this poem and I hope everyone else would too.
Great Job!
By Premice:)
I think that is true.
By:Joyce
Hello Aaliyah,
I really like your poem, as it’s very emotive. Also, I agree with you,
as people should not get into other people’s lives.
By :Ahmed A
Hi Aaliyah,
I really loved your poem. I love how you have structured it and how you have changed the font twice.
I don’t think I have anything to say that you need to improve on… but this- are`nt is not how you spell
aren’t.
By: Ela
Thanks for all your comments and thanks for the help with spelling Ela!
Aaliyah
Hey Aaliyah,
You’re welcome for the spelling Aaliyah. I hope to see more of your fabulous work.
By: Ela
Hiya Aaliyah,
I am verry glad you have wrote this because this
gives people ideas of what they are doing when
they are interfering other peoples lifes.Everyone shall
and should succeed on what they are trying hard on what
they are doing which makes them feel proud of themselves aswell 🙂
By Melissa………… We all miss you Aaliyah, we all wish you to come back 🙁
Hello Aaliyah,
I loved your poem! You are right about no one should but in your life. I would love to hear more of this poem and I hope everyone else would too.
Great Job!
By Premice:)