Hello Alkan,
I liked your mini horror story. I especially liked how you have described the thing trying to chase you, your words that you used to describe it was very/really high-quality. However, I do-not think that was 50 words. 🙂 I hope to read some more of your superior blog posts.
By: Ela
You made a few mistakes, but you have tried your best.
At the end you wrote – what am i going to do – you forgot a question mark! Also, some of your sentences did not make sense. Alkan you shouldn’t really tell us where you were, you should describe what it looks like and how you feel, which will make your writing closer to level 4.
Hello Alkan,
I liked your mini horror story. I especially liked how you have described the thing trying to chase you, your words that you used to describe it was very/really high-quality. However, I do-not think that was 50 words. 🙂 I hope to read some more of your superior blog posts.
By: Ela
Hello Alkan,
I like your story because it really has a scary parts in it but maybe next time you’ll use 50 words
by:Deshawn
Hello,
I really like your horror story especially because of the pictures you have updated to make the story much more scary.
– Janine 🙂
HI,
Alkan I think your Horror story was scary. I Also agree with Ela that was not 50 words.
But well done!!
By Samiyah Ahmed
Hi
I like the images, but I think you should describe the monster more.
Haroon
Hello Alkan,
This was a very good 50-word horror story. This is probably the best piece of writing you have ever done. Keep up the good work!
By Premice 🙂
Hello Alkan
I like your horror story, but you don’t need a capital letter at the middle of a sentence.
By:Redwan
Hello Alkan,
You made a few mistakes, but you have tried your best.
At the end you wrote – what am i going to do – you forgot a question mark! Also, some of your sentences did not make sense. Alkan you shouldn’t really tell us where you were, you should describe what it looks like and how you feel, which will make your writing closer to level 4.
From Tigris