Hi,
Wow, I dont know what to say, thats really interesting. I couldn’t stop reading, I just wanted to go on and on and on.
Senem you have a beautiful talent that you should share.
I like the way you have written one word and have put a full stop to build up suspense.
Maybe you should try putting in a complex sentence to describe how you are feeling.
Sadia
I really enjoyed your one. I wanted to carry on reading on and on. I really liked it when you wrote a short sentence and put
a full stop at the end. He’s near. That really created suspense for the reader. You could have included a complex sentence to improve it.
Hi,
Wow, I dont know what to say, thats really interesting. I couldn’t stop reading, I just wanted to go on and on and on.
Senem you have a beautiful talent that you should share.
I like the way you have written one word and have put a full stop to build up suspense.
Maybe you should try putting in a complex sentence to describe how you are feeling.
Sadia
Hi,
I like your horror story because it really draws your attention, I really wish you would carry on but it was only 50 words!
– Janine 🙂 😀 😉
Hi Senem
I just good want to say that I love your HORROR STORY . It’s just so good and you made really get into reading it .
WELL DONE!!!
By Hannaa Ijouiher
Hi Senem,
I love the way you change your front.I thought it was eye catching.I don’t think I can write something as good as yours.
By:Joyce
Hello Senem,
I just wanted to say that I loved your 50-word horror story. Keep up the good work!
By Premice 🙂
Hello Senem,
I really enjoyed your one. I wanted to carry on reading on and on. I really liked it when you wrote a short sentence and put
a full stop at the end. He’s near. That really created suspense for the reader. You could have included a complex sentence to improve it.
from: Tigris