Hey everyone,
I hope that you’ll like my 50-word mini horror story…I made a spelling mistake for: but- I wrote bit so I’m really sorry about that.
By: Ela
I particularly like the alliteration in the sentence ‘I heard heavy footsteps’ as it’s both descriptive and engaging. Do make sure you check your work, as you have made a few mistakes!
Hello Mr Short,
Thank you for commenting on my blog-post, I have recognised the silly mistakes I have done… I’m sorry about that.
From: Ela
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Hi,
Ela I think that your presentation is lovely,However I thought you could of used more adjectives and emotion.
WOW!!!
By Samiyah Ahmed
Hey everyone,
I hope that you’ll like my 50-word mini horror story…I made a spelling mistake for: but- I wrote bit so I’m really sorry about that.
By: Ela
Hi Ela,
That was scary. I had bad dreams.It was so good I don’t know what to say!
By:Joyce
Hey Jooyce,
Thank you for commenting on my blog post. I’m really sorry about the bad dreams and I hope that it won’t happen again.
By: Ela
Hello Ela,
I particularly like the alliteration in the sentence ‘I heard heavy footsteps’ as it’s both descriptive and engaging. Do make sure you check your work, as you have made a few mistakes!
Mr Short
Hello Mr Short,
Thank you for commenting on my blog-post, I have recognised the silly mistakes I have done… I’m sorry about that.
From: Ela
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Hello Ela,
This is absoulutely amazing. Well done!
By Premice
Hello Ela,
I really like your 50 words mini story!
I like the black background and the crazy halloween pictures…
quite spooky.
From:Aaliyah
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Hey Aaliyah,
I miss you… How are you?
Thank you for commenting on my blog-post.
By: Ela
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