Once again I am very pleased with your post, as I can tell that you’ve made an effort to use subordinate clauses, which will make you a level 4 writer. However, I do not like the sound of ‘which didn’t take quite long’. You should have written – which didn’t take long.
Hey Janine!
WOW! Your blog was very good! I like how you explained everything so specifically. Though I do agree with Mr Short. If you wanted to make this blog fit for a Queen, then all you have to do is press the edit button and take it from there!
Senem Osmankan
XOX
Hello Janine,
Once again I am very pleased with your post, as I can tell that you’ve made an effort to use subordinate clauses, which will make you a level 4 writer. However, I do not like the sound of ‘which didn’t take quite long’. You should have written – which didn’t take long.
You are very good at blogging!
Mr Short
Hey Janine!
WOW! Your blog was very good! I like how you explained everything so specifically. Though I do agree with Mr Short. If you wanted to make this blog fit for a Queen, then all you have to do is press the edit button and take it from there!
Senem Osmankan
XOX
hello
i really liked your post about Into university also i liked your font and your colur.
By ibrahim
Hi ,
we did have a great trip didn’t we?
Next time write your name plaese so we know who you are .
Faith Suika