What a terrific acrostic poem about Luol Deng, who is our chosen athlete for the school’s Olympic Week. You’ve used some good descriptive words: daring, extraordinary, lanky and undisputed. You should have written gaining strength all of the time, instead of gaining strength all the time. Other than that, I am very pleased.
Nice poem you wrote, I love your background just like I used to do it . I like how you described Luol Deng It’s very powerful. I think you used a lot of of powerful words and thats what I like about it.:) 🙂
Well Done !!!:)
By Hannaa Ijouiher:)
I really like the acrostic poem, as it describes Luol Deng very well and I find it very interesting. However, I think that you should be slightly careful about the background you use as it can make your writing hard to read and the colours clash together. Other than that your poem is perfect
Hello,
I like your lay out.
Try to put commas on the ends of your sentences.
Faith Suika
Hello Georgia,
What a terrific acrostic poem about Luol Deng, who is our chosen athlete for the school’s Olympic Week. You’ve used some good descriptive words: daring, extraordinary, lanky and undisputed. You should have written gaining strength all of the time, instead of gaining strength all the time. Other than that, I am very pleased.
You’re an excellent blogger!
Mr Short
Hi,
Thank you for the comments and the advice
From:Georgia B yr 5
Hi Gorgia ,
Nice poem you wrote, I love your background just like I used to do it . I like how you described Luol Deng It’s very powerful. I think you used a lot of of powerful words and thats what I like about it.:) 🙂
Well Done !!!:)
By Hannaa Ijouiher:)
Hello Georgia,
I really like the acrostic poem, as it describes Luol Deng very well and I find it very interesting. However, I think that you should be slightly careful about the background you use as it can make your writing hard to read and the colours clash together. Other than that your poem is perfect
By Janine 🙂 😀 😉
Hi BFF,
I relly like your writing
,but you coud do more
,but stel is good.
by:julia juju
Hello Georgia
I really liked you acrostic poem. I liked the sentence you wrote about gaining strengh of all time
By: Ahmed A